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Old 10-01-04, 05:42 AM   #9
Terumoto
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mkay..

thuglife: well, half your verse didnt make sense, the other half was weak as shit and pretty much didnt even punch. your structure was wack and pretty screwed up. Being a guy that really loves good flowing stuff, your verse almost killed me... i almost DIED from your verse it was so bad.. after seeing all the shit you talk its VERY dissapointing that this is the way you back it up.

POET:
some creative punchlines in there.. clown one was good.. win column one was good. your gettin the hang of REAL battles sorta.. flow was fine.. opener = good, closer = good..

an all round decent verse.
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