Voted For: Verbal Phenom

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verbal:you verse had good flow, the opening bar had a nice effective punch to start this off, some good multies in there as well,nice wordplay in the "bear, thats why left they in hibernation", line was good, you had some good punches towards the end and you kept the momentum, nice job
foto:your verse had the flow, but you lacked in punches and personals, but it wasnt too bad, liked your last line, but i'm going to give this to verbal phenom because of wordplay and vocabulary...




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