Voted For: oreo



the only good rapper that ever came from detriot was em,
and your scared to show your record cuz your from michagan,
you pm'ed me saying ill go first, ill win ether ways
now you aint dropped in two days,
now you scared so ill drop a verse,
scared oreo would put you in a lyrical herse?
^best lines outta the whole battle.......... lmao..... ha ha
oreo gets my vote cuz, he had the betta flow, had sum funny personals, the only thing i didn't like was the closer- witht eh trash and garbage- it was nice wordplay but a lot of people tend to use that, so it wasn't very creative, but the flow was on point, structure was aight........ multis needed work but overall it wasn't bad at all......... 7.5/10

wish:
ur verse had a good flow too, but them (-) dashes doesn't help ya flow unless u usin' it for wordplay...... your had a really dope closer as a nice personal.... lmao however, you verse had sum fillers basically....... and capitolizin' words doesn't give them an extra effect, nice diss but not very strong in my opinion...... nice vocab, and ur best lines were:
I'M-SAD-TUH-SEE dat' oreo BECAME A CASUALTY
This is Mortal KOMBAT, in FACT, I'll EXPLAIN MY FATALITY:/
I RAISE A KNIFE, ENGRAVE-N-SLICE yuh chest CAVITY
And hit you wit an uppercut n make you defy GRAVITY/
^^^^^^^^^ nice, lol..... 7.2/10 overall, good luck..... with this, ~wun~

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