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Old 10-01-04, 03:14 PM   #6
Premanition
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Voted For: One-Man-Band

man this was a real gud battle, both came with some really gud shit here....

empire -
ur verse was tight, thought ur flow went in a few places at the beginning but apart from that ur flow was on point, structure was gud and wordplay was too. I thought ur improved as u got further in it just seemed to be flowing together real nice n easy, liked the end thought that was a gud finish and overall a gud drop...

one man blind -
dope dope dope....man u always rise to the challenge, this was one of the best topicals i've read for ages, ur flow was perfect to me went down real smooth in my head, structure was very gud liked the way it was broke down making it into a gud story, to be honest wen i see a verse that long i usually start to read but don't finish but here you kept me wantin to continue, ur wordplay was real tight and ur vocab was gud too....i'd give this a 9.5/10.....props n great read..

vote - one man blind

verdict - just was too strong for empire here, who against alot of people wud have won wiv his verse but just out classed on this occasion by a topical vet...

props to both...

peace
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