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Old 10-01-04, 05:11 PM   #7
SubtleTee
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Voted For: Limited Edition

yo ill put ur face in shit thats my 1st hit get ur shit kit
get ur ass outta here go nit ya shit ur like a boy with a tit
^ Um...........whack punch'

man u cant rap ur wack n crap weres ya rap man ur fuckin crap
man i bet u so stupied u cant read a map u homo u tap(ed)
^ You rhymed rap and crap twice? Completly horrible

man u lyk jack n jil when my rhyms hit u ull be falin down w/out a pen
man my ryhmes ill man u need a rappin pill to beat me u like a gay hen
^ Ridiculously bad, no punch here

man u hoe man u like a gal named moe so poor with no doe
u need a life ill slice u wit my knife until u say "im a hoe"
^ Whack punch again

dam u wanker man u fat u define the word of tanker
man im am da banker with tha money yes u gonna get killed wanker
^ You rhymed wanker twice............whack


Now for Limited

I walk in the room...Madness shouts...I splatter ya spleen...
The darkened gloom...just with one punch I shatter ya dream
^ Kinda a weak opener

You just better drink some gin...because you ain' gonna win...
It's a sin, but I will let both of those things sink into your skin
^ Again, not too strong

Turn up ya treble, dawg you can't fuck wit me, I'ma rebel...
Flesh of Devil, wacker than me only puts you on a higher level
^ Not really a punch

That's the way it is, sadly, but I will merk you wit ease gladly..
Like ya avy, to beat me, you never wanted somethin' so badly
^ Nice personal

I'm only bein' reasonable, but you see I am undefeatable...

I accomplished something here...

...I DESTROYED "Unbeatable"...
^ SICK closer



Overall, Limited just had much much better punches. Lyrical couldn't hope to stand up to it



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