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Old 07-15-02, 06:33 PM   #10
rar one
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Vote= Cfc

over all Cfc had better metaphors in his verse.. Your punchs werent all that bad, but your flow was way off, you really need to work on it..Multis coulda been alot better same with vocab..over all id rate your verse like a 6

Skills you had weaker punchs.. and metaphors for that matter.. you were trying to force wordplay and punchs and it wasnt working for you..
Upp a lil on your punchs, and metaphors, then try at it again..

over all id rate it like a 4..

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