Voted For: N.E.T

Emcee:~{exclusive}~

Verse:This kid called me on, not knowing the meaning of romance…
In fact don’t make me play him before the times up before I advance/
I already won, you got no chance but ill wait for yer rhymes to progress…
If I hafe to ill just spit a quick freestyle like I was haven fun with you in recess/
My rhymes will make him never regret it, so ill leave him and upset…
He’ll feel like I burned him with the hot spark from my cigarette/
Its up to you if you want to stay here cuz ill win, its you decision…
If you choose to stay you’ll end up at the doctors needin an incision/
You must be mad cuz of the way my style is meen and vicious…
Why did you hafe to sneak up and take a look, yer way to suspicious/


Comments:im not gonna D-r im gonna vote honestly i think that you need to elevate in ur metas and get some sick punches out there no hate whatsoever...if you work on this i guarantee youll be just that much better...

Marks:
Wordplay - 5/10
Metas - 3/10
Vocabulary - 4/10
Structure - 6/10
Punches - 6/10
Opener - 5/10
Closer – 6/10
Personals – 5/10
Enjoyment – 3/10
Creativity - 4/10
Overall - 47/100
----------47%

Emcee:N.E.T

Verse:
Stop, quit, drop the mic, get fired or retire
You spit a little bit of heat and now you think you’re on fire
I’ll serve him on a plate after I beat and kicked him
Swallow him whole, sick him back up, then he’s a recycled victim
You couldn’t beat me if I give you cheats or even a walk through
I’ll put a bullet in your throat, so your Adams apple has someone to talk to
Then I’ll murder this bitch, then do it again and then
Leave him shaking, and it won’t be the adrenaline
I put dashes-in-to-stretch-my-words-like-elastic
But when I say your whack, its true, im not being sarcastic
You’ll look back at this and say it was an historical session
Is he whack? Don’t answer, that’s a rhetorical question
We all know the answer; it’s a well known fact
Let’s just say you’re an average rookie, and let that be that
I aim at your temple for the immediate takedown
You’re an enzyme, when I raise the heat, you begin to breakdown
sorry to disappoint but i just raised and beat ya
Dat AK will concept, and teach cha

Comments:kid sick drop i liked some of your metas but some of them werent as good...good job you win by metas and some vocab

Marks:
Wordplay - 6/10
Metas - 6/10
Vocabulary - 6/10
Structure - 6/10
Punches - 7/10
Opener - 5/10
Closer – 3/10
Personals – 4/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 7/10
Overall - 56/100
----------56%

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