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Old 10-01-04, 07:04 PM   #11
Abraxas
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Voted For: Phantom

close battle reall good punches and personals from both..

Phantom: good shit nice drop though it wasnt your best one ive seen... you had good strucutre and it was good ya flow was good... ya had it with the personals cos it was good ya punches were iight i guess but overall goods verse and i undstand it....... some were just plain shit though.. you shud try harder in ya abttles....

Anxiety: yea ya shit was iiight nice verse and good overalll it was kinda messed this was not ya best vesrse though and you have to try harder ... some of ya shit sisnt rhmes and it was iight ya personals were not that good and yeapunches were iight ya had goos structre... and all flowed ok...

VOte Phantom for a better verse but he won by a very lil bit
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