yo man finish this piece, its aight, I no what your saying everyone thinks your into the music to be cool or something, but that just silly idiots who listen to metal and thats what your saying, so to the person who said is it like bein an outcast to like hip hop nah its not,

I was feeling the first verse more than the second.

but im labeled wired cuz i dont like rock/
really i dont giv a fuck/
c cuz every where i look some mudda fuckin goth/
stair @ me thinking im rong as thou everyone is off/

that part was nice,

I would say try and expand your vocab and complexity, this is something I need to work on I think as well.

Could you give my Single Verse piece some feed man.