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Old 10-01-04, 08:44 PM   #15
Abraxas
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Voted For: Trojan

both of you were iight and it was iight battle overall

Trojan: nice verse overall and nice lines too you were iiht in this battle not that good as you used to be but it was good ya lines were a lil stretched out though ya flow was iight and ya structure was good you had good punches in ya verse and ya personals but the way u screwed it up a lil is ya explination is was fucked up every fucking herb nos that.. damn dont put explinations unless its a deep punch..

Yvoone :nice lines but not so great ya punches were ight and ya personals were good though ya had good structre but in my opnion ya flow wasnt that great improve ya verse more

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