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Old 10-01-04, 08:48 PM   #9
Abraxas
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Voted For: Ice Pick

lol both of you were good at this siht though sum lines were stretched up line a mo fucka so improve on that siht..

Ice: ya verse was good iight shit nice lines and nice verse overall. ya had crappy as fuck strucutre though ya flow was flowesd well you need tyo improve on ya structre cos its wack though it aint all... punches were iight and ya personals were iiht too but not as good yuo ddint sem to try hard enuf... ya closer was fucking wack and it ddint go well...
nice verse though

KUstum: ya shit was iight though yes it was fucking strecthed up as hell ya punches weree iight and ya punches wee good and shit..... improve on ya flow and structre though

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