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Voted For: Empire
the votes here, ya can read who i voted for...
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well
Socrates: ya verse did have a punch, had a scheme, no scenario, no structure, no multis, no plot, no vocab. ya need to spend more time on ya verses, stop rushin, if ya didnt rush than ya plain suck. ya need a better closer, then ya might've got my vote, but might dont count, unfortunately.
empire: ya rhymes came better, ya flows a lil like me. but ya had a few weak lines, ya musta known this cat was lame, and just spit your decent lines to em , haha, well ya had some structure, i feel ya vocab, i dont check links, so next time dont have a "url"...ppl dont check em, well just take ya word for it, when ya throw down the personal. had some nice punches, ya similies and metaphors were aight. the analogy was tight. good win.
return the favor, links in sig. pz.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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