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Old 10-02-04, 01:59 AM   #10
JackOfAllTradez
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From: Cali4nia
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Voted For: Big Woody

Emcee:TheJudge

Verse:
Big woody a bitch his rhymez is trash
he soft only thing he take hard is dick 2 da ass
I break um like glass leave face down in da mud
this punk is a hoe got pussy fluid for blood
Big woody twisted he got dat luv for da dick
this homo is hungry so I feed him a lyrical clip
I rip um open like a bag of chips
This nigga chase men like he da rabbit and they trixs

Comments: well i liked ur last line alot...mayb coz it was ur ONLY META!! or GOOD LINE YA HAD....elevate kid...dont aim high aim low like evry night...lol

Marks:
Wordplay:4/10
Vocabulary:3/10
Punches:5/10
Metas:5/10
Personals:6/10<<<the trix shirt
Creativity:3/10
Enjoyment:2/10
Structure:4/10
Opener:3/10
Closer:7/10
Overall:42/100
---------47%


Emcee:Big Woody

Verse:
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I'll verbally assualt you the way I drown you in my flow..........
Tear you through center fold, make ya teeth touch ya toe......
I spit lead fragments like a Mossberg pump, aimin at ya chest..
Find half of ya body in a stump, with ya head all depressed.....
Class is still in session, there's 5 more lines til recess..............
I use lyrical aggression to pause your mental progress............
kid ill beat ya, but looks like ya comp will CTRL-ALT-DELETE ya
you aint "the judge" of shit bitch just a witness of a new era...
I herad you was nice on tha mic, i must've been mistaken.......
Kuase you have no future in rap...know why? kuase Im already taken.....

Comments: i think that you were overall better because you were more consistiant in all areas...good job....just elevate a lil more..

Marks:
Wordplay:6/10
Vocabulary:6/10
Punches:7/10
Metas:6/10
Personals:7/10
Creativity:6/10
Enjoyment:5/10
Structure:6/10
Opener:5/10
Closer:6/10
Overall:60/100
---------60%

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