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I just don't give a fuck!
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IP:
Voted For: ella
Aight Imma Give This One To Ella Basically Cause Had Better Punches And Vocab Was Definatly More Efficient.
Structure: Would Have To Give It To Ella. Close But, Stephen,
Some Of Ya Lines were "Choppy".
Punches And Personals: Ella Again. Stephen Some Of Ya Punches Hit While Others Were A Lil Weak. I Liked The RV One. Try To Be A Lil More Creative With Ya Punches.
Ella I Liked Ya Personal In The Opening Bar. Hit Hard. Ya Second Last Bar Was Dope Too (For Those Who Actually Understood It.. Lol) And Ya Closer Was Ill.. Nice Job Funny Too.
I Give this To Ella Coz Of Ya Vocab, Punches. And Stephen Didn't Have Any Personals While Ella's. Also I Found Ellas Humerous. Stephen, The Only Punch That Stood Out Was The RV One. Apart From That Nothin Really Hit.
Vote: Ella
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