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Voted For: shadow
Ok vote goes to Shadow.
Basically, Rhymewise, Fluids verse was verrrrry stretched. It had some decent emotion in it, but it finished pretty weak.. There was really no conclusion to it except to push the same fact that she was crazy. Shadow had better emotion and some really good poetic connections. The words used in it had much better imagry instead of simply telling a story.
That is why my vote has to go to shadow. Peace.
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