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Old 10-02-04, 11:21 AM   #9
Keith Moon
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Posts: 3,908
From: Pomona, California
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Voted For: Street poet

I’m soon TO CLAP YA FACE IN, bringin DOOM AND AMPUTATIONS//
Cut u in half leave u topless like HOOTER APPLICATIONS!//

ehhh good 6/10

poet’s the illest, i been patently waiting to hurt you. I'm slaying your verse// dude.'
Cause in these battles, I'm always "One Leg Up" like women’s shaving commercilas//
2/10

But now Voetsek’ll cast ya limbs take ya record blast ya wins //
Rock ya jaw so hard im gonna make u "glass ya chin"//

4/10
truth is, Your just a wack dude spittin, and its a fact, dude listen//
I got lyrics that 'Pop eyes'(Popeyes) like fast food chicken.//
5/10

Now wicked just Fuck Ya bitchin, ill make ya tummy and neck tuck n twist in//
then knock ya lights out like a old clumsly electricians//
6/10

23/50 points elevate fix ya structure...get some lfow going

You've seen to came to this site droppin heat...
But since then you've just constantly gotten weak...
3/10
I'm just startin' my demo CD,and you claim you gotta deal in tha works...
But at tha pace your rap games moving I'll drop an album first...
2/10
Your being 'faded' bruh,but this ain't no BK barber-shop...
But like hair clippers in an amatures hands I'm sure to scar your knot...
7/10
Your a fraud so your lyrial outputs get no applause...
When I cause your lyrics downfall by ripping off your balls...
4/10
Your not a violent guy so why try acting tough,you wack as fuck...
And no one on RV respects you as if that wasn't enough...
2/10

18/50 man hsake that rust off take a bath or sumtin
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