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IP:
Feedback Granted:
overall was on the better half of the scale.
ya said the word feel too many times.
but thats alright, ya girl must've felt
very special once she read it, ya have nice
perception, and nice insight, i wish ya
wouldnt have declined our battle, i dropped
a decent topical, that would have gave ya
a challenge to beat, bu eh...ya focus was
internal: had depth and had blunt statments.
more similies and metaphors and itll be an
'A' paper. thats verb's feedback. pz.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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