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Old 10-02-04, 02:19 PM   #13
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: Street poet

I’m soon TO CLAP YA FACE IN, bringin DOOM AND AMPUTATIONS//
Cut u in half leave u topless like HOOTER APPLICATIONS!//
^best opener, lmfao......... nice..

Now wicked just Fuck Ya bitchin, ill make ya tummy and neck tuck n twist in//
then knock ya lights out like a old clumsly electricians//
^best closer nice metas... hard punch....

Street Poet- had the harder hittin' punches... better metas and wordplay...... Wicked One you didn't came very hard in this battle.. but ur drop wasn't bad at all, in example i liked ur bar that said:
Your being 'faded' bruh,but this ain't no BK barber-shop...
But like hair clippers in an amatures hands I'm sure to scar your knot...
^very nice...... but ur verse didn't come hard like street's did, so that's why i give him the vote... better punches and vocab too...... good luck with this.....
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