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Old 10-02-04, 02:27 PM   #18
Kawn Flixx
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

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this a one-sided
one who did everything right
and one who did everythign wrong

Verses:
you had some very nice flow
I read your verse with eas and not having to stop
your structure was easy on my eyes
you punches were nice but some weren't insulting
him and more at what you used for wordplay
like the philly line
ut it was still nice


Thug
your lines were very short
so flow was off teribly
and punches were basic and so was ur voacb
and al the verse was painfullybad

vote/Notorious Verses
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