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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
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fiya had punches that landed on limited edition, LE's punches landed but not all of em were good for even hittin fiya
fiya: ya had some nice punches, the opener and closure were nice. slow ya vocab down, a lil vocab is nice...but too much makes the verse hard to read, and ya dont want ya flow thrown off, well nice drop...i was feeling the structure mainly, had some nice similies, need some more metaphors though, overall, grade A verse. nice drop ya won in my opinion.
limited edition: had some landed puches, ya started off weak and thats what i had the most crueshal judgement toward, ya need a hook, somthing that will open up ya verse, and keep us (voters) interested, but nuff preaching, ya had structure, ya ending was aight, ya opener cracked it, seems to me like ya rushed it, and didnt take ya time. plus the line about the droppin a topical in a text battle, i used that like 3-5 days ago. check the "wicked one" link in my sig.
drop an honest vote, wicked one = its in the sig.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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