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Old 10-02-04, 03:26 PM   #20
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

^you should watch ur wordiness cuz it can throw off ya flow.... but nice opener, the closer was nice but doesn't rhyme..

best lines:
I Spit Hardcore And Reel At All Times, But My Flow Is Flexible
I See U From Philly But Like Da Teams Dere, Dawg U Neva Successful
^lol nice job... lol

Certified's best happened to be:
see man u try ta act hard wit ya record of 0 n 1/
man as u kan see u jus a straight bum/
^not bad the only tru personal....... i see ya elevatin' ya verse... nice job..

I picked Notorious cuz he came harder with punches had the more creative touch in his verse.. nice wordplays some decent metas....... he had the better opener and closer and his vocab was really good........ y'all both gotta work on structure sum what... and certified u need to make ur verse a lil' complex or put sumthin' creative within it...... good luck with this, nice battle you two.. but Notorious got this battle easily..

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