Voted For: shadow

None of us understood her behaviour,how could we?,her mind worked differently...
For it wasn't her acting, it was the voices, directing her so critically..........
^oh my goodness............. that was deep my goodness, nice imagery the part with the hamsters was so specific and worded perfectly, it's like i can see every single thing u mentioned.... very nice........... i dunno what to say.. nice job fluid very touchin'....

shadow- i read urs last, dayum ya story's very, very specific and yet delicate, it's like a movie or sumthin', i like the different transitions within your topical..... the point of views were connective to the audience in other words sumthin' many of us could relate to, you best portion was the end..
+ insanity takes over+
i walk to the man..hit him in his face he hits the hard ground..
i slap his wife..and take her to the sea to let her ass drown..
cant contol my self im on the edge only god himself new my fate..
sit on the park bench as my suicide is what i contemplate...
im on the edge..i no longer wanna live my pothetic damn life...
sirens roar police suround the parkas i put up a fight..
i grab a kid away from his parents and use him as my hostage...
with all intentions of dying and producing total carnage...
the cops moved in closer i snap the kids neck and he drifts to heaven..
and now im sad i took it out on him..he was only fuckin eleven..
+the closure+
on death row walkin the greenmile ready for my execution...
killing those people did no good and brought me no resolutuion..
im strapped in the minister walks away..and says go to hell bastard..
im definitly on the edge now..becuz god is too whom ill answer..

^very nice, you seem to connect better with ur verse but in general for the topic, u both did an excellent verse...... good luck you two, A.I. topical heads........
~wun~ shadow- u took this one, fluidmoon- u did very well..

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