that was funny....i give it an 8......you should have made those last 3 lines like this and made it 4

Through ya Back-and-Soul and so exits ya Rap-so-Fold
But that’s As-a-Whole ya just an Ass-in-Whole
With brute force we Blast-a-Hole through ya fat head like a donut
So meet me in a battle if ya ever feeling Bad-and-Bold and then WHAT

that would be a lot better......you could have made this whole thing a lot better
but i give it an 8 in all

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