Voted For: SubtleTee

Emcee:SubtleTee

Verse:
Here's the link to text elevation, come and battle me after you go use it./
Watch me drop X harder and faster than ravers jamming to techno music/

I rhyme too hot. An effortless win, I’ll easily slice through all you brought./
But it’s easy to aim KO punches cuz all pirates know X MARKS THE SPOT/

Battling me is the equivalent of blind Spanish cripples trying to race bulls./
And you’ve only got DMX in belly after taking a round of cumshot facials./

I know elevation can cause frustration, but whack lines just invite hate son/
Now I understand why he listed getting “schooled” as a full-time occupation./

Left helpless like kids with ~broken necks~ my ill lines stay ~smoken vets.~/
And like a Mothers Against Club Drugs meet there won’t be any votes for X./

Comments:i think you took this because of harder hitting punches and more metas...g'job

Marks:
Wordplay:5/10
Vocabulary:6/10
Structure:7/10
Punches:7/10
Personals:8/10
Opener:7/10
Closer:6/10
Metaphors:6/10
Creativity:5/10
Enjoyment:6/10
Overall:63/100
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Emcee:x-on

Verse:
Ayo:

Ones left thinking and contenplating why you think X-on's got weak punches?/
After this battle you'll understand only good shit you got in your "school lunches"//
I'm a try to be a scocialogist on this one, and try to make a hypothesiss/
Cause my senses say i'll kill your style and leave you burried in a sarcafaguiss//
You fail to understand i'll leave you out of a job like a "NHL PLAYer"/
Or like Eminem fucking Cage, you cock sucking day raper//

Comments:well most of the time you shouldnt have to explain punches and personals....the only ones you might have to explain are ones that you leave links to or whatever may be ur reasons...you dont listen to a song and dont understand it...then at the end they give and explanation to evryword they said...

Marks:
Wordplay:4/10
Vocabulary:5/10
Structure:6/10
Punches:5/10
Personals:4/10
Opener:5/10
Closer:5/10
Metaphors:4/10
Creativity:5/10
Enjoyment:2/10
Overall:44/100
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