Nights Verse:
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*Silent Chaos* Shit AInt -Possible-//A *LightWeight* Knockin A *HeavyWeight* The Shit AInt -Probable-//Your Spits Aint Makin Sense Your Shit AInt -Logical-//You *Fucked Up* Like A Christian Clutchin -The Koran-//You Like Tupac Rockin SOme Mutha Fuckin -Sean John-//You Wack Twisted Red An Blue In A -Crip Blood Area-//You Muthafuckin Enjoy The Night But The Day Be -Scarin Ya-//You Like *Pillows* Soft To -Pac A Punch-//Im Similar To A Needle *Poppin Cherries Like You* -By THe Bunch-//You Similar To Jordans Feelins After Missin The -Clutch-//Not A Shot Nigga The Pedal And Then -You Crash-//Head Falls Off Cops Only Explanation WAs -Speedin Too Fast-//Me Im Like *Cocaine* Destroyin You Wit A -Couple Lines-//Catacalistic Movements Through You Abdomes Similar -To -Enzymes-//So Why You Actin *Silent* Is Fearful -Of Talkin-//I Leave Ya Cut Up -Unable Of walkin-//I DId This Cuz I Figured A *Parapalegic* Aint -Gettin Far-//Hows A SIlent Mutha Fuck Gonna Fuck Wit THe Meta In This -Last Bar-//Stupid Bitch If You Tore Up *Tyson* An Left Him Dead You Still Couldnt -Kill Mics-//So Fuck You Im Done Wit This -Silent Silly Dike-
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Night...how can i put this..either i wasnt feeling you or you was just plain out whack..i got most of the shit you were saying but not enough multis if any...veeerrryyy weak vocabulary...you need some elevatin big time..you punches were somewhat o.k. but im sure after you battle more peeps on here you'll get the hang of it...your first two bars were off...forced i might say...and i really didn need all the stars and dashes...and you last closing bars..rofl..no man...no...
Silent Verse:
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Yo yo yo, aight, I rip M.C's like you daily without breakin a sweat, I'ma rape you 'n you can take dat as a threat./
You's my bitch-my brand new pet, I'ma win this like I'd win a bet./
You so fake you got yer own ghost writer, you can't win a battle cuz you aint even a fighter./
Lighten this bitch on fire, wit my black 'n blue lighter, my lines aimed at you like my sniper./
You can't rap cuz I've rip yer vocal cords out, don't matter you couldn't rhyme anyway so go ahead 'n cry n' pout./
You'd have better luck beatin me by rappin about trout, yer rhymes are so off course you need to find a new route./
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Silent...the yo yo yo part is uncalled for..this is not an audio this is text...first bar was nice...first two bars was nice multis wise...i really wasnt feelin ya punches though but you did have a nice closing two bars with the find a new route thing
Overall:
to be honest i really wasnt feelin either textcee here...i think that night got silent punchwise for the simple fact that he had more..silent came with more multis than night did as well as a better vocabulary than night so with silent multis and vocab..as well as nice punches (the ones that he did throw) i gatta go with silent
Vote: SilentKaos