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Old 10-03-04, 04:39 AM   #16
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Voted For: Yvonne

sup yve?

ya flow got a little stretched at times but i see ya constantly getting better...good deal with the nameplay... punches were better...nothing spectacular but still stronger than "Limited" editions...lol

Limited came soft with the attack..."only way you sick" lines are played...second bar was filler...third bar was wack... closer needs a lot of work... omma give you the benefit of the doubt and say it was a rushed verse but you need to get more complex and build ya vocab... come with harder punches... work on ya structure too...not too bad but it still needs work
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