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Old 10-03-04, 07:35 PM   #15
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

notorius verses,
good structure elaborate rhymes scheme with multies to induce good flo..not great punches but u had some that connected no doubt about it..u won easily..
optimized,
pretty horrid structure,
u had multies but not very many at all..ur punches were weak and almost childish..just all around not a winning verse in this battle not really close..notorius took its easily
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