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Old 10-03-04, 09:43 PM   #12
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Voted For: Empire

hard to say...but ima have to give this one to Empire...his punches hit SLIGHTY harder...and becuz ya use of vocab...helped u get this one in my opinion...ya structure was shaky....stretched and that messed up the flow...ya opener coulda been betta...and ya closer was bad...that needed work..seem like u slacked towards the end to me....

Black Plague..
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......ill lines and such are gettin pretty played...so try not to use them...ya verse was ok...but ya structure was stretched..ya punches coulda been betta too man...ya opener was meh..it was an ok personal...but still work on that too..ya closer was ok though...nice and different...by that i mean u used things from the bible to talk about a Empire collapsin..

both of yall semeed like yall slacked so that made it closer to decide..but i gotta give this to Empire...
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