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Old 10-03-04, 09:59 PM   #17
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Voted For: WORDPLAYA

verbs scalp em with malace...n comidate your hair as a bandage.
put scare in this savage...you couldnt use prayer as advantage.
OK WACK PUNCH GOOD FLOW
ellas got this kid sprung n hungry...n its origin is hollow.
like sick kids with small tubes...im forcin em to swallow.
AGAIN NO PUNCH GOOD FLOW
only thing you forge is my motto...your rap's wack resident.
to believe you defeat chicks like me...you better photograph the evidence.
NICE DISS GOOD FLOW STRUCTURE STRECHED
must serve the greater half of elements...or eye the gutter.
my presence aint to can your rhymes...but merely guide the cover.
FLOW AGAIN NO PUNCH
keep keying your life away...and youll forever live your days obsurd.
this a game of numbers n stats...theres no slot to PLAY A WORD.
FINALLY DOPE FUCKING PUNCH GOOD PERSONAL FLOW AGAIN GOOD STRUCTURE STRECHED
forget the future, its present...votin for you would be the worst lie.
if id key wack punchlines...wed see rap verses very first tie.
DOPE PUNCH AGAIN GOOD
bread n chicken dinner...will have me wrappin this fool's leg.
your easily digestive...down you like black kids with kool-aid.
WACK PUNCH HERE
punches landin...write this story fiction, like hes handing me wet fire.
even your internet knows your wack...how it randomly expires.
WACK AGAIN
got you cascet ordered...you wont be a bitch to bury.
you dont scare me...your an upated list, a played words dictionary.

DOPE PERONAL ENDER ALSO
OK ELLA GOOD FLOW AND VOCAB ALL THROUGH PUNCHES WERE IFFY SOME HIT SOME SLACKED A OK VERSE NOT YOUR BEST BY FAR

diss battle is a wrap................. we gone tELLA dat
pussy so loose n wit my rhymes it can't help but clap
GOOD PUNCH HERE BAD WORDING OK OVERALL GOOD FLOW
u spit crap....... a mischieveable deciever a fuckin hoe
got lime light no swallowing 'sticks' is da only way u 'glow' *
DOPE PUNCH AND WORDPLAY HERE NICE GLOWSTICKS THATS SOME OLD SCHOOL SHIT
to late 2 escape u accepted regrettin is where u headed
yo legs have been spreaded like stretches in athletics **
OK PUNCH NOT GOOD
get it........ probably not da cockin leavin ya brain rotten
n fuck a dog infer red light or sperm is how u been spotten
OK PUNCH ENDER WACK WONT EVEN LIST IT

OK BOTH GOOD FLOWS WORD HAD BETTER STRUCTURE BY FAR FLOWS TIED ELLA HAD BETTER VOCAB WHILE ELLA DID HAVE SOME GOOD PUNCHES THE MAJORITY WERE WACK SO WORDPLAY WINS MY VOTE WITH A HIGHER PERCENTAGE OF GOOD PUNCHES ENDER WAS WACK BUT WORDPLAYA HAD BETTER PUNCHES OVERALL

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