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Old 10-03-04, 10:07 PM   #6
Artemis
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meh, this was an aiight battle. Neither came that hard.

Arch, your verse was decent. Had some good punches, but none really hit that hard. But they were aiight. Flow on this was nice though. Smoothly went through the shit. NBice. I liked yo opener though, that was nice. props, decent verse.

Ill, your was aiight. But I really don't think any of yo punches really hit that hard. It was kinda boring reading it. Try to make some funny punches and shit. But the flow was nice. But yea, improve the strength of yo punches.

no hate. v/ Arch. pc
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