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Old 10-03-04, 11:11 PM   #8
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this battle goes hands down to toxic for better wordplay and wittier punches.He didn't have any personals but the punches made up for that.Hella stretched lines too,better watch that/
King,your shit didn't make much sense and 90% of it should've been reoworded.The nerd blind date line....um no.
you had one ok line in your verse and it was the opener.Apart from that,your verse was weak.You need to work on structure,complex wordplay,and hard-hitting punches.

V/ Toxic verbz.
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