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Voted For: String9487
shit this was some long ass shit...you guys should only drop half as many lines so it isnt as annoying to read...
String-your verse was alot better than LE's because you had some good personals like the closer.Your punches hit hard an your structure wasn't too too bad.I liked 90% of your lines like the rollerskates line,weapons in Iraq(that was a HOTT line) and pretty much every other one.Your flow was nice,and your wordplay witty.
LEazy-your verse sucked,no offence but nothing was really a hardcore diss in there...you had 1 or 2 decent lines, but the rest was plated and wack.Either you didn't try,or you need some serious elevation.Work on your structure,wordplay and ounches because it was all weak.
V/String.
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