The Original Half Ass King
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Voted For: KoObOo
holy fuckk! KooBoo that was a dope verse man, why you battlin herbs for brotha...goto elevated, LOL!
Lets see:
warrior: that was a wack structure dawg, you better elevate that an pick up a new format, that one was too hard to follow. Next, your vocab was elementary, your personals were weak attempt, and Im quite sure your punches were hurting yourself more than your opponent...Try harder when it comes to punches cause those are what make a battle a battle, otherwise your just basically freestyling. Also, to add to your verse, just using wordplay, metas and harder multies...not beefin just tryna help you out dawg.
Kooboo: Tight verse kid. you slayed him. You had great structuring - very neat and organized, vocab was mental straight up off the hook, punches were on fiyah, Only thing for you to eleavte i would have to say use more personals and multies...also shorten your bars a bit to make the flow of your overall verse more clearer, but other than all that your killed him, good job on this easy win, payce..
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