^^^ yo i agree

for a first time poetry drop it was good. u got all the rewuirements for it to be gud, emotion and feeling in it. u got it into detail like VALOr said, and basically all u need is a little more of the emotion and feeling. I enjoyed the poem. VALOR basically said it the best, and all i can do is agree wit him. Keep the poetry comin ECKO!!!!

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