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Old 10-04-04, 11:34 AM   #15
Lil-Youngstah
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Voted For: Infector Mindz

Aight First of All both Rhymes we're kinda wack on some parts....

i say Infector Mindz had dat 1...
he had a good Structure,
openin verze good
came a lil bit weak on some lines
he didn't came dat hard but good...

Two_bit
Kinda of a Short Verze
there's not enough lines or punchlinez to tell where
at who u we're comin at
good structure
didn't come dat hard but good...
openin verze good

u need it a lil bit of work on your verze
though it was good..keep at it...

ye so da vote goes 2 infector
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