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I just don't give a fuck!
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IP:
Voted For: intensify effect
Imma Have To Give This To I.E......
Yvonne: Ok, First Of All Ya structure Was A Lil poor...I Couldn't Really Tell Where Ya Lines End Or Begin. Also I Feel That Ya Punches Wern't As Creative As I.E. For Example Ya 6th Bar Was kinda Childlike... lol sorry.... Try to Improve Ya Wordplay and Metas.....
I.E: Structure Was Ok, Some Lines Were Stretched. You Had Some Nice Wordplay In This. Ya Opener Was Set Up Well But I Feel That The Second Line Was Kinda Weak.....The Four-Kast Joint And The 50 Cent Thing lol. Nice Wordplay. Overall I Think Ya Had More Creative Punches, With Some Nice Wordplay.
Vote: I.E......
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