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Old 10-04-04, 01:54 PM   #17
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droppin an open call wen im online, wat were ya thinking about?
wat a waste, my limits should have me drop God's link and im out.
^^wasnt feelin it..
i check in, and have ya second guessin. im gonna jerk ya lisp.
auto declined my battle, cause his wisdom knew i wasnt worth the risk.
^^2 bars n no real tough punches??..wassup..?
i planned this lesson, puts herb n newb together how ya biting the keys.
ill just move on to my next problem, cause ya just a dividend
of 90 degrees.
^^ok nameplay ok personal
so your the kid p-dizzle, ya mugshot stated no girl would date you.
some 50 verses created mayhem, Ha...and 10 lines was all it took to brake you.
^^nice flow weak punch though
im still gonna win, no matter how hard ya hopin i key wack.
this wasnt even my verse, its just ya open mic feedback.
^^lol...ok closer but couldve been better



You called me out first, actin' like a herb and you'll lose
You ain't nuthin' but talk, no wonder you're Verbal Abuse
^^nice personal punch n good flow
I ain't wanna have to murder you boo, but I'll do more
'Cuz you only got ill from being the high school whore
^^decent...
You dope? Look like a drug addict, this hype is smoked
VirginiA's pushin' sweet-n-low 'cuz she though it was diet coke
^^ok....
You know all about bein' real, I don't have to teach ya
'Cuz you incorporated your name with how your boyfriend treats ya
^^i liked this..lol...not a great punch though but i laughed..
This battle's typical, you're gettin' screwed, peep how I work the hole
But you're bout to son sumthin' too...'cuz I stole your fuckin' birth control
^^best line in the whole of the 2 verses,funny shit...
great closer i thought...lmao....nice

overall both came pretty well verbal you lacked on the personal punches that wat lost you this battle....degree had some pretty witty punches that borderlined humour n wow..so he gets my vote for an overall better verse..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!