Voted For: final

this kid claims in his rhymes he spits nothin but venom, shit...../
but the only poisonous liquid he spittin is inside of his dick/(AIDS)
5/10 ... not really feelin this . been flipped so many times ...

this is not what i expected,this kids rhymes are horrendous/
his flow is so offcourse.........it matches with his record/
4/10 ... didnt really rhyme ... whack punch.

those corny raps u bringin aint accepted,that shits despised/
ya record keeps plummiting..........to a steady fast decline/
5/10 ... this didnt really rhyme either .. and you should use his record as an examply twice in a row ...
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i got gats thats made for stickin/
i get more chicks laid than chickens/
[b]2/10 ... wtf. you dont brag about how many people you lay in a battle ...

got rhymes that u cant handle
in a battle, i'll wear u out like a sandle/
1/10 .... no comment ...

yo i stand out like hair with jell
make u fall out this rap game, oops u just fell
1/10 ... wtf ...

cuz ur rhymes aint well
it wont ring a bell
so shut yo mouth up fore i turn ur life to hell
2/10 ... nope

u'll drop screamin like a roller coster
bust my gat and stick u like a fuckin poster
do i got cash? i get more bread than a toaster
3/10 ... haha decent (the toaster part even tho it's played as hell)

in rap im numba one
my rhymes over cuz i got "FINAL"y done
3/10 .. good try ... bur wasnt feelin it.
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poison ... your punches was mad whack kid ... u got to elevate some. use some multis,metaphors ... it was just a boring piece to read.

final ... not very good either .. but u came harder with the punches ... so u get my vote .