Voted For: Dopeman

Aight, this battle wasn't that great. Lyricle came with a little better structure. Dopeman, your lines were somewhat stretched, so you should work on getting your point across in fewer words. Lyricle, although you had better structure, that's pretty much all you had. Youre punches were weak and didn't connect, they were really basic. No hate though, just elevate. Dopeman, your opener was rather weak, I got the first line but the second didn't bring any punch at all. Your second bar came off more like you were scolding hm rather than battling him. Your finnisher had some aight wordplay, but I felt the last line could've been better...
Both of you need some elevating, need to work on your punches mainly, but my vote goes to Dopeman because his punches were harder and his style wasn't as childish as Lyricle's. No hate, just dropping an honest vote.

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