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Old 07-16-02, 04:46 PM   #7
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Ballistik's stats..
Metaphors/Similes: 6
Punchlines: 6
Vocab: 7
Multisyllable: 6

overall nice verse
your personals were hitting the hardest throughout the verse
the multis made ya verse shine
punches were so&so could of used more thought
decent vocab

Rar One's stats....

Metaphors/Similes: 7
Punchlines: 7
Vocab: 5
Multis: 7

this was a decent piece
you were lackin heavy on vocab
but the flow to it was hot
the multis were pretty ight
some punchlines i was feeling others i wasn't
but overall nice piece

My vote is obviously :Rar One
i just felt he applied more to the battle in overall lyricizing
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