yo i just need to see if i wasent in a crew would i get in? this is from one of my battles i had a few personals and some wordplay nice vocab and nice flow and stucture think its good or do i need a lil time? im not leaven my crew unless you want me bad and i dont think you do cuz i still need practice i think... here it is:


Hand it up you’re the wackest ever, the worst whats yer cause?...
Ill freeze you make you pause, make the crowd chant in my applause/
You will be askin why I hit something beyond perfect perfection…
Ill sit in laugh at you cuz you only just hit your first erection/
This guy thinks hes good rollin as a newb that’s just seventeen…
My rhymes are given him a cavity like I was a “candy machine”/
Boo I scared you like I was rollin as “scream on the day of Halloween”…
You can suck your B/F’s chode its fine with me if its yer normal routine/
Hes from the southwest of Houston, what you think your a balla?...
Ill pump you up leave you twistin, like you were “poor with no dalla”/