Voted For: poison

aight poisons verse

aight
ima give u some reason not to fuck with me
check it out

i got gats thats made for stickin/
i get more chicks laid than chickens/
cleaning mc's like mades in kitchens/
got rhymes that u cant handle
in a battle, i'll wear u out like a sandle/
my raps glow like a candle
yo i stand out like hair with jell
make u fall out this rap game, oops u just fell
cuz ur rhymes aint well
it wont ring a bell
so shut yo mouth up fore i turn ur life to hell
u'll drop screamin like a roller coster
bust my gat and stick u like a fuckin poster
do i got cash? i get more bread than a toaster
in rap im numba one
my rhymes over cuz i got "FINAL"y done

and finals verse

this kid claims in his rhymes he spits nothin but venom, shit...../
but the only poisonous liquid he spittin is inside of his dick/(AIDS)

this is not what i expected,this kids rhymes are horrendous/
his flow is so offcourse.........it matches with his record/

those corny raps u bringin aint accepted,that shits despised/
ya record keeps plummiting..........to a steady fast decline/

so poison u got this
verse=7/10
punches=8/10
structre=8/10

final keep elavating

punches=6/10
structure=5/10
rhyme=4/10