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Old 10-04-04, 08:14 PM   #13
~Sonofisis~
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Structure - verbal abuse has less stretched lines
punches - verbal abuse' was more damging, and more clever
Wordplay - Verbal abuse had more multies
Flow - Verbal, the multies helped the flow, transition was better.
Overall - Verbal easily takes this, with more complexity and more originality.. i like her style.. Dopeman, you should just work on your flow and structure more, and for this battle, some better punches, but this barley goes to verbal abuse..


Plz return the favor with an honest vote in my battle right here, thx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153028
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