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Old 07-16-02, 07:08 PM   #2
DaGyrlRemarqabL
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Sup MR eS??
Its been a minute since i've seen you post anything...I thought this piece was really tight..You were on point with every stanza and every message you proposed to get across in each..

Some lines i really liked were:

>Is just a hobby nowadays, everyone serves around the way
Even my gardener has the hook up for some sticky Bombay

>Lets cut the rich-bitch-shit and take it back to the notepad
The pen was ya voice, no one hunted the net uppin they vocab

haha..i really liked the whole last 2 stanzas too..shit, the whole thing was nice..rhyme scheme was unique but it worked for ya..flow was on point with the multi's n all..all around nice drop..feelin it..stay up n keep blessin us.
peace.
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