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Lyrical Prosperity
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IP:
Voted For: oreo
vote to oreo!!
pull out the scalpal, pull out the table,
thats the only way youll cut me up if your were able,
well, pretty good idea, but could have been executed better!
Im tellin you before u spit leave and forget it
Im just that red sign on your page tellin people to exit
first line is bad, but second is good.
Introduction goes to surgical!!
your like 12 with out a win and surgery is your hoobby?
well put an iv in your skin, cuz that will be the only flow in your body,.........
im too sick with my flow, he here goes a doctor on rv,
quit frontin hoe, leave the e.r. shit to t.v.,
These are two good as punches, i think the second one is better.
You foolish thinkin you could see the best
Im new like DVDs and you outdated like VHS.
This was surgicals only real punche and it was quite weak.
Punches to Oreo!!!
For good flow you must try to keep all your lines even, none of you really did this, but surgical had some long lines and soe very short lines...eg..Your loosing your breath dont panic
Im bout to sink this youngin like that ice berg did titanic.
And that is poor flow..
Flow goes to Oreo whos flow kept fairly consistant over the battle.
Vote to oreo......please return the favour and vote on one of the battles below, thx
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