Got to say man, I thought this was aight,

This is a well thought and deep piece man, I like it pretty much, overall it was nice. These four lines were ill man: -

cus studyin fa test wont feed you and ya peeps//
only way the rents paid is when you get paid in the streets//
and ya moms found out she can't get the lease//
the only entertainment you got is ya dreams when you sleep//