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Lyrical Prosperity
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Voted For: grimripper
Alright, vote goes to Grimripper!
yo im out here tryin to prove that im a worthy rapper
this guys like a bug getting merked by my bug zapper
Average intro, basic punch, no real depth to it.
eat it grimm feel my flow,gotta pack of zigs and a bag of dro
you fukkin pussy gonna be a no show
me and my venomspittin gonna blow
a fat load like u a fukkin hoe
Um...WTF absulutly pathetic, sorry man but it just is, you need to exstend you sentences and uses metaphores and wordplay!
Intro goes to Grimriper!!
this guys wack thinkin he cant beat the grim
the guy doesnt even have a win but wishes he were slim
buckshot spittin his rymes like he's some kinda sharp shooter
the only job he has is delivering papers on his electric skooter
Lol, good flow, 1st bar a bit crooked but it is straightened out as it works through...good flow!
me and my venomspittin gonna blow
a fat load like u a fukkin hoe
i hate when ppl dont have no goal
be like tha rock and know your role
bitch u gotta fukkin clit ring in your lips
walkin around wit your j-lo hips
you fukkin bully your gonna get hit
cause im tha grimm one you aint shit
all i gotta do i touch u and thats it
Pathetic flow, sentences to short, rapid ryming(try to exstend you sentences and say shit before you ryme ok!!)
Flow goes to Grimripper!!!
buckshot spittin his rymes like he's some kinda sharp shooter
the only job he has is delivering papers on his electric skooter
the way i wrap dogg its electrifyin
cuz its my record not ur that the people be buyin
These two lines are your best punches, the last lines not bad aswell, pretty funny but i think you need a bit of wordplay!
Young buckshot has no punches, he just rymes.
Punches go to Grimripper
Vote goes to grimripper, yo well done man keep it up, please return the faavour and vote on one of the battles below thx!
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