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Better than you..
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Voted For: Word-Scape
not bad battle.
Lyric - alright verse mate, decent structure, wordplay was average didnt rhyme on a line (line 7 and 8). there was an attempt at punches and personals so at least u tried i just didnt feel any connected well.
Word Scape - this was a pretty good verse some witty personals and punches. u got some tight lines in there. (cuz kid flips more lines.............than crackheaded clowns!)
u got some alright wordplay and structure accepted. you took this one out mate.
vote goes to Word Scape because i think his verse was tighter, had stronger punches and just generally better written then lyric.
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..ADLIB..
Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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