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Old 10-05-04, 03:11 AM   #12
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Voted For: J-Will

aiight...decent battle....good luck to u both.

chosen1- verse was really poor in my opinion. u need to work on structure so that most of your sentences are pretty similar in length. try to expand your vocab and use better words in battling and u should do better. everyone has potential mate but u gotta strenghten ya skills....only comes with practice. no hate this is just my honest opinion.

J-Will - this was a good drop mate i liked ya verse. no question you took it out with ease. good punnches, structure was a lil bit 'iffy' in some spots but its good enough for this battle. decent wordplay and good vocab.

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