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Old 10-05-04, 09:59 AM   #13
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Voted For: Ennovy

Okay Imma Give This To Yvonne.

Ice Pick: Ya Structure Was Kinda Streched But Ya Had Multies So It Was Ok. Until Ya Last Bar No Multies And Streched Like Fuck. Flow Was Off In Tha Last Bar.

Punches: Ya First B. Was Just A Statment No Punch
Second B. Again Just A Statment But Ya Had Some Nice Wordplay And Multies.
Third B. This Was Ya Best Punch Nice Meta And That Punch Hit.
Last B. It Was A Tight Bar I Just Felt That It Was Really Streched And The Flow Was Off.

Yvonne: Nice Structure And Ya flow Was Nicely On. You Had Some Multies Here Too Also Nice Metas And Wordplay.

1st Bar: Kinda Weak Didn't Think It Hit At All......
2nd Bar: Good Bar Was A Lil Betta Than Ya First One....
3rd Bar: Nice Punch I Think This was A Personal: Ice's Old Avy
Closer: This Was Ya Best. Nice Wordplay On His Name And Personal About His Sig.

Overall I Give It to Yvonne Cause She Had Some Nice Personals Although I Do Recommend That You Word Ya Shit Better Next Time.

Vote: Yvonne